Today I did a paragraph on an eels appearance.
The easy part about writing the appearance paragraph was putting facts into sentences.
The hard part was finding high level words.
This is the finishing touch of my paragraph.
Appearance
In shape, eels are elongate, slender-bodied fishes, almost tubular. When they are small, they have relatively smooth heads but as they grow the head becomes bulbous, with a prominent muscular dome behind the eyes.
Thats really good tia. Nice pro-nouns, personal pro-nouns. Really good. Cant wait to read the rest of your report :)
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